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hi whoever could be reading this, im lisa, i am 14; i live with my mom and older brother

we used to have fun here... until dad died; now its just a loop of the same events.

we wake up,
eat toast,
run to school,
come home,
eat dinner,
bed.

and it goes on, and on, and on, and on
but im tired of it.
i want to make a change!
So here is my story of how i changed my world.

CHAPTER 1:
WHERE IT ALL STARTS

"time to wake up" says mom
"ok, coming mom!" i shout down the stairs.
"hurry up brat." my brother blurts out at me
"you dont tell me what to do!" i shout angrily
"OH YEAH?!" he screams menacingly
"oh just leave her alone" mom tells him
brother grunts.

"now's my chance" i think to myself
"mom whats for breakfast!?" brother shouts down the stairs
i grin as i edge closer to him, now im close enough to push him!
"i hope to its toa-"he begins to say
i push him and he squeels like a pig! i have never felt so much joy!
"what was that!?" mom shouts, worried
i mumble the word delete 5 times before running down and tackling my mom
"HONEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING THIS IS NOT YOU!" mom screams loudly as tears run down her face
"no, its the NEW me" i whisper

CHAPTER 2:
THE MONSTER BEHIND THE GIRL

my eyes turn lifeless i run to grab a knife;
but mom scrambles to grab the phone to call the cops
"hello?! please hurry my daughter has turned insane! HURRY!"
i run over to my brother, he has passed out;
"adiós" i say before he is gone.
mom just looks at me with this shocked look in her face
she looks up and says "god, why did you put the devil in my child, why not me?"
mother falls to her knees
"go on lisa, if your there...do it now... mother will forgive you and will meet your soul in heaven" she says quietly
i am stunned for five seconds; but i have the urge to do it
"sorry mother" i say as i shed a tear
i slowly walk over, crying i do it...

CHAPTER 3
CONSEQUENCES

the cops walk in and shout "NOBODY MOVE!"
one whispers into the radio "the suspect is a blond haired miner holding a bloody carving knife... you got that?"
i run into the dining room and grab dads old hunting shotgun
but, it has 2 shots left in it so i hide around the corner while shaking
but as i go to fire i have a flashback about the one time me and dad went hunting and caught a fish
while im stunned the gun fires and a cop in the foot
he shouts "REQUESTING BACKUP AT SUSPECTS LOCATION" into his radio
i shoot again... it hits the wall
suddenly our house is surrounded, so i give up
the cops take me to away to a far away mental hospital

(please remember im not trying to be edgy)
(SORRY FOR ANY GRAMMAR MISTAKES D:)
hi whoever could be reading this, im lisa, i am 14; i live with my mom and older brother

we used to have fun here... until dad died; now its just a loop of the same events.

we wake up,
eat toast,
run to school,
come home,
eat dinner,
bed.

and it goes on, and on, and on, and on
but im tired of it.
i want to make a change!
So here is my story of how i changed my world.

CHAPTER 1:
WHERE IT ALL STARTS

"time to wake up" says mom
"ok, coming mom!" i shout down the stairs.
"hurry up brat." my brother blurts out at me
"you dont tell me what to do!" i shout angrily
"OH YEAH?!" he screams menacingly
"oh just leave her alone" mom tells him
brother grunts.

"now's my chance" i think to myself
"mom whats for breakfast!?" brother shouts down the stairs
i grin as i edge closer to him, now im close enough to push him!
"i hope to its toa-"he begins to say
i push him and he squeels like a pig! i have never felt so much joy!
"what was that!?" mom shouts, worried
i mumble the word delete 5 times before running down and tackling my mom
"HONEY WHAT ARE YOU DOING THIS IS NOT YOU!" mom screams loudly as tears run down her face
"no, its the NEW me" i whisper

CHAPTER 2:
THE MONSTER BEHIND THE GIRL

my eyes turn lifeless i run to grab a knife;
but mom scrambles to grab the phone to call the cops
"hello?! please hurry my daughter has turned insane! HURRY!"
i run over to my brother, he has passed out;
"adiós" i say before he is gone.
mom just looks at me with this shocked look in her face
she looks up and says "god, why did you put the devil in my child, why not me?"
mother falls to her knees
"go on lisa, if your there...do it now... mother will forgive you and will meet your soul in heaven" she says quietly
i am stunned for five seconds; but i have the urge to do it
"sorry mother" i say as i shed a tear
i slowly walk over, crying i do it...

CHAPTER 3
CONSEQUENCES

the cops walk in and shout "NOBODY MOVE!"
one whispers into the radio "the suspect is a blond haired miner holding a bloody carving knife... you got that?"
i run into the dining room and grab dads old hunting shotgun
but, it has 2 shots left in it so i hide around the corner while shaking
but as i go to fire i have a flashback about the one time me and dad went hunting and caught a fish
while im stunned the gun fires and a cop in the foot
he shouts "REQUESTING BACKUP AT SUSPECTS LOCATION" into his radio
i shoot again... it hits the wall
suddenly our house is surrounded, so i give up
the cops take me to away to a far away mental hospital

(please remember im not trying to be edgy)
(SORRY FOR ANY GRAMMAR MISTAKES D:)

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TsaoShin Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2016  Professional Digital Artist
Hey there! Welcome to DeviantArt!
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GeorgeXVII Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2016   Traditional Artist
Hi SkyLieLanie :wave:
Welcome to deviantart, the place where you will find awesome art and artists ! 
Hope you will enjoy your stay and this experience will help you to become a better artist !
best regards! 
Kindly,
GeorgeXVII 
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mitoXD Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2016   General Artist
Hi lilanie, welcome to dA!  :)

Do you know you can share your ponies and OCs easier by joining groups?  Look for these you like in the "MORE|Groups" menu.  Also you can watch and fave other deviants and their works, or exchange llama badges.

Have fun!  =^^=
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